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Redemption

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David B Sloan

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When she left, I couldn’t understand why,
My pain so great, I could only cry.
I thought I found a redeeming grace,
“I’ll find someone better to take her place.”
But no substitute could satisfy,
No better love would get me by.
So now a truer way I finally see:
Redemption comes in discovering me.

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